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My opinion about Ibrat language camping center

My opinion about Ibrat language camping center eRLjp

Ibrat language camp is based on teaching, learning from each other and sharing ideas with other educated people. It is one of the most prestigious camp centers in Uzbekistan. It can help us to improve our speaking, listening and writing also reading skills, which can guarantee to get high band score in the IELTS, TOEFL and CEFR. Honestly, when I heard about this camping center, I increasingly excited because by joining it I can learn tons of knowledge and share ideas with new friends. Also it provides not only good condition to gain knowledge but also enjoy breathtaking views to relax and we do not have to pay for these. I am preparing all things needed for camping. They are: summer clothes, personal hygiene items, furthermore, we have to take identity document, test results submitted by covid 19, they are important. If I am accepted I will be immensely grateful. I expect that day.

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 high band score in the IELTS, TOEFL and CEFR.

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