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A person who has influenced: My Mother

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My mother has influenced my thinking in two ways. My mother was always a good role model for me as I was growing up. Firstly, My mother hard-working, patient and understanding. She got up at breaking dawn and worked until dusk to get enough money for my education and our income is always at a subsistence level. She always makes time for me and my brothers/sisters. Another major influence of her that I can imitate is her ingrained in me kindness. She's also got a good sense of humour and seems to get on well with everybody. Since I was a child, I have seen her doing small but warm-hearted things for people around her.
My mother has influenced my thinking in two ways. My mother was always a
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role model for me as I was growing up.
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, My mother
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hard
-working, patient and understanding. She
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up at breaking dawn and worked until dusk to
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get
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enough
money for my education and our income is always at a subsistence level. She always
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makes
time for me and my brothers/sisters. Another major influence of her that I can imitate is her ingrained
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in me
kindness. She's
also
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good
sense of
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humour
and seems to
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get
on well with everybody. Since I was a child, I have
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seen
her doing
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small
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warm-hearted things for
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around her.

IELTS essay A person who has influenced: My Mother

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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