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a period time from your studies that was the most difficult to you so far

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So, honestly speaking, I am a kind of person who kinda good at studying. Most of the time, I get the high score. But there is a time when I didn’t schedule my time effeciently so that I was so stress to handle all of tasks. I still remember vividly it was our final semester week. We had a lot of test and assignments which had to be completed. So before that, we all had to make sure that lessons had been reviewed already. Unfortunately, I also had to participate in an english competition. And it was really difficult to study both at the same time. I had to cram for my study from 5 am until midnight. My healthy was badly affected. After all, I got the best result and everything is pay off.
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when I didn’t schedule my
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effeciently
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that I was
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remember
vividly
it was our final semester week. We had
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a lot of
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test
and assignments which had to
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.
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So
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before
that, we all had to
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make
sure that lessons had
been reviewed
already. Unfortunately, I
also
had to participate in an
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english
competition. And it was
really
difficult to study both at the same
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. I had to cram for my study from 5 am until midnight. My healthy was
badly
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affected
.
After all
, I
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got
the best result and everything is pay off.
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IELTS essay a period time from your studies that was the most difficult to you so far

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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