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a meeting for the presentation

a meeting for the presentation Lw0DK

Being a sophomore student in university, the presentation is familiar with us. Having many of meeting in order to prepare for the presentation, however a meeting which I made in covid19 circumstance it seem to be quite difficult because I and my team had to be in touch through online meeting. Last term, I entered the upper intermediate listening and speaking, the half term first we studied in uni, but then we had to learn form home because of the pandemic, the teacher said that we had a presentation in group, so my group decided to meet a meeting by zoom. Our topic was quite hard, so firstly we set an agenda, the leader distributed chores for other member. We all shared the idea together, give an opinion, jot down some notes. The first time we all felt comfortable for the organisation, but then we met some interruptions like someone was not joining together, he felt bored because he account the topic was hard, he did not felt interesting in this one. I said him that we must complete this presentation successfully and gain the high score with confidence. fullFortunately, he agreed with my advise. And our presentation was absolutely successful. In my point of view, teamwork is incredibly significant. I can learn a lot of thing from every teamwork I join like the ways deal with issue, do not give up, do best effort.

Being a sophomore student in university, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
 is familiar with us. Having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of meeting in order to prepare for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
, however
 a meeting which I made in Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid19
 circumstance it seem to be quite difficult This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I and my team had to be in touch through online meeting.

Last term, I entered the upper intermediate listening and speaking, the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.half-term
half term
first
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but
 then we had to learn form home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the pandemic, the teacher said that we had a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
 in group, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my group decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 a meeting by zoom. Our topic was quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
firstly
 we set an agenda, the leader distributed chores for other member. We all shared the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 together, give an opinion, jot down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 notes. The first
 time we all felt comfortable for the Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 then we met This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 interruptions like someone was not joining together, he felt bored This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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account
 the topic was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, he did not This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
felt
 interesting in this one. I 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean "told"?told
said
 him that we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 complete this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
successfully
 and gain the high score with confidence. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFullFortunately
fullFortunately
, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 with my The word 'advise' is a verb. Did you mean "advice" (noun)?advice
advise
. And our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
 was absolutely
 successful.

In my point of view, teamwork is incredibly
 significant. I can learn Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of things".a lot of things
a lot of thing
 from every teamwork I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 like the ways deal with issue, do not give up, do best effort. 