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Childhood obésify has become Serious problems in recent years what are the Primary causes? what measures should be taken to reduce it ?

Childhood obésify has become Serious problems in recent years what are the Primary causes? what measures should be taken to reduce it? q1eA5
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In the
current
scenario, Individual has an immense
imPact
on once
lifestile
.
it
is a fart that I it
has
been
objav
that
corputtence
intunt
has become
buring
issue in recent time.
Theyle
cille
Sevegial
aleasons
for such a
cifcumstance
. Both the
prilimnarent
associated with the
aforemention
epidemic along with
some
possible solutions
аre
projected in the ensuing
parugruphs
. In this paragraph, I will throw light on the reason, the predominant one is lack of nutrients.
owing
to the fact that Juveniles has
fastfood
not
only
savoury
but
also
,
as well
Sweets
delictis
. In exemplification
indians
have a
triedision
of
etining
Some
diguds
and
everyneid
. The other
muinspying
children in the recent time, have
Drughams
and inter
Pritentale
group OD
pued
is
Pogishion
to Worlds Television video
gums gums
.
sewive
3
schle
can be
beter
condect
buy
a which
wipow
that over 34.
of
children below the age ten
Year's
Sub from
obcity
beucuse
of
excisiv
use
childwood
obcift
beucuse
of of
relevision
and mobile phone what is m
numeroso
f
Juvenies
alle
in
blance
.
omega
^ 0 from
how
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IELTS essay Childhood obésify has become Serious problems in recent years what are the Primary causes? what measures should be taken to reduce it?

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