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Nowdays tourism places is play important role in income for many countries. this essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and a provide a conclusion The two main benifts of the tourism are increase income of country and more new job oppertuanties. firstly, when the people visit the tourism then they spend money of wide range service, hotel rent, travel charges, food and medical services. Secondly, with the result of tourism increases the large number of employment with the new job. For instance, the tourism result large demand for restaurent work, tour guide, staff and business hosting to hire the people for this position. But limitation of that price rise of goods and services is main cause of tourism. To Explain, the people in increase in same touriam place then services are expensive and some people cut the trees and makeing a road, building or hotel for living of tourisam so that is direct effect on environment, with the cut of trees so many problems like draught and rain effect are produced and direct effect on wildlife. Another, during the large lavel of tourism create some illegal problem such as some tourism carry cemaras, money and jewellary with them and increaseing attraction of criminal and brings a activity like drug dealing. In conclusion, I belive in pros and cons of this passage. With the tourism create some jobs for local areas, it is a positive impact and the negative impact is that tourism cause bad effect on the environment for own living
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places is play
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this
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of
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tourism
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a conclusion

The two main
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benifts
of the
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are increase income of country and more new job
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oppertuanties
.
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firstly
, when the
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people
visit the
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then they spend money of wide range
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service
, hotel rent, travel charges, food and medical
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services
.
Secondly
, with the result of
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tourism
increases the large number of employment with the new job.
For instance
, the
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tourism
result large demand for
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restaurent
work, tour guide, staff and business hosting to hire the
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people
for this position.

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limitation of that price rise of
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is main cause of
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. To
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in increase in same
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are expensive and
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the trees and
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a road, building or hotel for living of
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tourisam
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problems like
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are produced
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on wildlife. Another, during the large
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create
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illegal problem such as
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carry
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cemaras
, money and
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jewellary
with them and
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increaseing
attraction of criminal and brings
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activity like drug dealing.

In conclusion
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in pros and cons of this passage. With the
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create
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jobs for local areas, it is a
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impact and the
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impact is that
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cause
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on the environment for
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living
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IELTS essay A lot of places torism income

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
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