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a line from a song or a poem

I am keen on listening to music in my spare time. So today I would like to share with you a line from a song. It is an American song called “ Older” of Sasha Sloan. I don’t remember exactly what time it was released but there is one thing I ensure that it is prominent and won a lot of rewards at that time. The first time I hear it was several months ago when I was surfing the tiktok. I just unplanned hear it but it caught my mind immediately. It goes like this: ‘ the older I get, the more that I see, my parents aren’t heroes, they just like me ‘. I thought the writer express her thoughts through this song but accidentally, it was my feeling and my thoughts too. It reminds me of my childhood with a lot of unforgettable memories with my family, some conflicts between us happened which made a distance among us. but after this sone, I felt like I can understand my parents and it made me love them more. That is reason why I always listen this song whenever I have time.

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