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A large number of parents and students think that the current college entrance examination should be abolished altogether. What is your opinion? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A large number of parents and students think that the current college entrance examination should be abolished altogether. What is your opinion? with this statement? pe7E0
A huge number of parents and students think that the recent college entrance examination had better be abandoned altogether, while others have the opposite view. In my opinion, I think that the university entrance contest should be continuously maintained for the following reasons. An obvious reason is that the college entrance contest is fair for all students from all backgrounds. They only have to study and review their knowledge to take the exam without worrying whether they have enough conditions to apply or not. For example, gifted students can easily apply straightaway by school profile and certificates of extracurricular activities to the college or university which they want. But the students who come from village schools cannot do that because of the poor conditions. So the college entrance exam is the best solution for them to find a brighter way for their future. Another reason is that pupils can learn many things while preparing to take the college entrance exam. They not only need to study in a smart way to raise the awareness of subjects for this contest, but they also have to be under high pressure during this process. Vietnamese students, for instance, have to study thirteen subjects at school which is a huge knowledge for them. This requires pupils to make a detailed schedule to review effectively for their self-studies. This may help them have the skill of planning suitable schedules and be more patient and disciplinary when doing tasks. Last but not least, the entrance examination could classify the levels of students. When students having the same majority are arranged into separate classes, it would be good for them to improve and broaden their knowledge because they can share ideas and have the condition to approach advanced understanding. In conclusion, any parents and students say that the college entrance exam should be abolished altogether. However, there is stronger evidence that this contest can bring many benefits for the young because of some reasons above.
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that the recent college
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examination had better
be abandoned
altogether, while others have the opposite view. In my opinion, I
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think
that the university
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entrance
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contest
should be
continuously
maintained for the following reasons.

An obvious reason is that the college
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entrance
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contest
is
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fair
for all
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students
from all backgrounds. They
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have to
study and review their knowledge to take the exam without worrying whether they have
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enough
conditions to apply or not.
For example
, gifted
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students
can
easily
apply straightaway by school profile and certificates of extracurricular activities to the college or university which they want.
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the
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students
who
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from village schools cannot do that
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because
of the poor conditions.
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So
the college
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entrance
exam is the best solution for them to find a brighter way for their future.

Another reason is that pupils can learn
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many
things while preparing to take the college
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entrance
exam. They not
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only
need to study
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in a smart way
to raise the awareness of subjects for this
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contest
,
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but
they
also
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have to
be under high pressure during this process. Vietnamese
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students
,
for instance
,
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have to
study thirteen subjects at school which is
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a huge knowledge
for them. This requires pupils to
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make
a detailed schedule to review
effectively
for their self-studies. This may
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help
them have the
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skill
of planning suitable schedules and be more patient and disciplinary when doing tasks.

Last
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but
not least, the
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entrance
examination could classify the levels of
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students
. When
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students
having the same majority
are arranged
into separate classes, it would be
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good
for them to
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improve
and broaden their knowledge
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because
they can share
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ideas
and have the condition to approach advanced understanding.

In conclusion
, any parents and
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students
say that the college
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entrance
exam should
be abolished
altogether.
However
, there is stronger evidence that this
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contest
can bring
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many
benefits for the young
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because
of
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reasons above.
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IELTS essay A large number of parents and students think that the current college entrance examination should be abolished altogether. What is your opinion? with this statement?

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