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n our modernized era, where new technologies are done for people’s need, all nation should be permitted to university study programs regardless of their academic ability

n our modernized era, where new technologies are done for people’s need, all nation should be permitted to university study programs regardless of their academic ability p5ORD
Essay. In our modernized era, where new technologies are done for people’s need, all nation should be permitted to university study programs regardless of their academic ability. I strongly believe, university study is the highest option for people. In the paragraphs below, I will the best way of university method. First, now days all pupils are trying to enter the university. Due to the fact that, university study is better than academic ability. If someone learns at the university method that will enter the university. For example, teachers have got two abilities, one of them is academic certificate, one of them is university diploma. In the result of this motion, these kind of graduates will reach their aims. Second, university graduates are supplied with work by university leaders. On the contrary, each person is choosing to university study. In comparison, it is very hard to enter the university that is why, it is getting rise digital economy. It is easier to study at university than work at field. For instance, university workers are work at the office on the contrary, shepherds are work at hot desert. Among the most vital reason, per pupil is choose study at university. On the other hand, if someone studies at the university, they will send their money for their meal, rent or act things. However, if someone studies at the lyceum, they will spend less money than university graduate. Such as, lyceums are nearer than university. In the result of this occasion, university method and lyceum methods are equal for humans. In my conclusion, per person should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their academic ability. These are
Essay.

In our modernized era, where new technologies
are done
for
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people
’s need, all nation should
be permitted
to
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university
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study
programs regardless of their
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academic
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ability
. I
strongly
believe,
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university
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study
is the highest option for
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people
. In the paragraphs below, I will the best way of
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university
method.

First
,
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now
days all pupils are trying to enter the
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university
. Due to the fact that,
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university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
is better than
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academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ability
.
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If
someone learns at the
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university
method that will enter the
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university
.
For example
, teachers have
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got
two
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abilities
, one of them is
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academic
certificate, one of them is
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university
diploma. In the result of this motion,
Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?
these kind
of graduates will reach their aims.

Second,
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university
graduates
are supplied
with
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work
by
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university
leaders.
On the contrary
, each person is choosing to
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university
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study
.
In comparison
, it is
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very
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hard
to enter the
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university
that is
why, it is getting rise digital economy. It is easier to
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study
at
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university
than
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work
at field.
For instance
,
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university
workers are
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work
at the office
on the contrary
, shepherds are
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work
at hot desert. Among the most vital reason, per pupil is
Consider using a past participle here: "chosen".
choose
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study
at university.

On the other hand
, if someone
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studies
at the
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university
, they will
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send
their money for their meal, rent or act things.
However
, if someone
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studies
at the lyceum, they will spend less money than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
graduate. Such as, lyceums are nearer than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
. In the result of this occasion,
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university
method and lyceum methods are equal for humans.

In my conclusion, per person should be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
admission to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
programs regardless of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ability
. These
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are
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IELTS essay n our modernized era, where new technologies are done for people’s need, all nation should be permitted to university study programs regardless of their academic ability

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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