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a growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited while other argue humans must employ animals for research and foods. discuss both views

a growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited while other argue humans must employ animals for research and foods. discuss both views xmkKo
Some people feel that animals must be given the same rights as humans and they should be treated well. Others opine that animals are meant for feeding human needs and research on them should continue for scientific development. In my opinion, animals also have a life and they should be treated well and not overly exploited. Many activists argue that animals are exploited for human needs and wants. They are often kept in harsh conditions, and many die out of suffocation and stress. For instance, the use of animals in luxury goods is unreasonable, a lot of people use leather products, which is made using the skin of animals. The activists point out that the mistreatment of animals for unwanted aspirations of humans should be stopped completely. On the other hand, researchers believe that without conducting extensive research and testing on animals, it is highly impossible to develop new medicines and drugs for curing illness. Today, many new products are introduced in the market after testing them on animals, and if not tested this could lead to serious implications in human life. Thus, for making human life better scientific research on animals cannot be eliminated. However, we can take the necessary steps to ensure that animals are not overly exploited by introducing strict rules and regulations. To conclude, I agree that animals are abused by humans for personal needs and scientific research. Although we cannot completely stop their usage, we can definitely take the necessary steps to ensure they are not exploited for the unwanted needs of humans.
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life and
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. The activists point out that the mistreatment of
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for unwanted aspirations of
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humans
should be
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On the other hand
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animals
, it is
highly
impossible to develop new medicines and drugs for curing illness.
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new products
are introduced
in the market after testing them on
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animals
, and if not
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this could lead to serious implications in
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human
life.
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, for making
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life better scientific
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research
on
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animals
cannot
be eliminated
.
However
, we can take the necessary steps to ensure that
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animals
are not
overly
exploited by introducing strict
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rules
and regulations.

To conclude
, I
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and scientific
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research
. Although we cannot completely
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stop
their usage, we can definitely take the necessary steps to ensure they are not exploited for the unwanted
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of
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humans
.
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IELTS essay a growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited while other argue humans must employ animals for research and foods. discuss both views

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