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Uk Industry and Service GDP

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Beginning from IT industry, we can appreciate a sharp GDP increase between 1992 and 2000. Indeed, the IT GDP percentage has raised almost 250% in these years and it represent, nowadays, the 15% of entire United Kingdom Gross Domestic Product. If we focus on 1994-1996 range, we can also note a little constant growth which has seen a high rise by the next four years. For those which concern the Service Industry GDP we can achieve similar conclusions. Since 1992, and for the next eight year, the United Kingdom has seen a 200% growth in the Service Industry market. However, Service Industry country income has raised slowly than IT and it experienced a rose steadily increase during all these years. Comparing this data, today, in ’00, Service GDP percentage is 8% of total GDP, almost half than IT percentage, which is attested at, more or less, 16% of the whole Uke GDP
Beginning from IT
industry
, we can appreciate a sharp GDP increase between 1992 and 2000.
Indeed
, the IT GDP percentage has raised almost 250% in these years and it
represent
, nowadays, the 15% of entire United Kingdom Gross Domestic Product. If we focus on 1994-1996 range, we can
also
note a
little
constant growth which has
seen
a high rise by the
next
four years. For those which concern the
Service
Industry
GDP we can achieve similar conclusions. Since 1992, and for the
next
eight year, the United Kingdom has
seen
a 200% growth in the
Service
Industry
market.
However
,
Service
Industry
country income has raised
slowly
than IT and it experienced a rose
steadily
increase during all these years.

Comparing this data,
today
, in ’00,
Service
GDP percentage is 8% of total GDP, almost half than IT percentage, which
is attested
at, more or less, 16% of the whole
Uke
GDP
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IELTS essay Uk Industry and Service GDP

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