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A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc. ). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. QNYK
In my opinion, the role of the government should encompass all sectors of the society, such as: provisions of health, education, national security and infrastructure. Private institutions can aid the delivery of these services thru subsidize methodology however it should be the government's ultimate responsibility to execute such programs to the community. In this essay I will discuss the reasons why
In my opinion, the role of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should encompass all sectors of the society, such as: provisions of health, education, national security and infrastructure. Private institutions can aid the delivery of these services
The word 'thru' is informal. Consider replacing it with "through".
thru
subsidize methodology
however
it should be the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
's ultimate responsibility to execute such programs to the community. In this essay I will discuss the reasons
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why

IELTS essay A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc. ). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

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