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A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc. ). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. QNYK

In my opinion, the role of the government should encompass all sectors of the society, such as: provisions of health, education, national security and infrastructure. Private institutions can aid the delivery of these services thru subsidize methodology however it should be the government's ultimate responsibility to execute such programs to the community. In this essay I will discuss the reasons why

In my opinion, the role of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should encompass all sectors of the society, such as: provisions of health, education, national security and infrastructure. Private institutions can aid the delivery of these services The word 'thru' is informal. Consider replacing it with "through".through
thru
 subsidize methodology however
 it should be the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
's ultimate responsibility to execute such programs to the community. In this essay I will discuss the reasons Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphwhy.why!why?why:why,why;
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