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a country which has free heathcare has a healthier population

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Free health care should be made available in all countries so that the health of the population can be further improved. Health care is indispensable for everyone, but sometimes it becomes a luxury because the cost for this is quite expensive. if the poor don't get free health care, their health will get worse. If only the rich had access to health care, they would become differentiated from the poor. Free health care is an opportunity for those who don't qualify. for example, during the covid 19 pandemic, if the poor get sick, they can't afford to treat the disease, they will lead to death. and only the rich have better health. This leads to a life imbalance. Free health care is a sign of a developed civilized society
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, they would become differentiated from the poor.
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the rich have better
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IELTS essay a country which has free heathcare has a healthier population

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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