A company has announced to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the decision? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2
A company has announced to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the decision? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
I my society, unemployment is the biggest problem. 50 percent of people are unemployed and the other half is, do not get paid well. A company is announced to build a large factory near my community, this will prove beneficial for the my society in terms of getting a job, improving lifestyle, and it will also help in providing a better infrastructure then now.
First and foremost, people get job from factory. they will make money from it. For instance, In my city, a Information technology company inaugurated an office of their company, so my home town students which are qualify for that positions, now get a job easily. These days do not have to go to another state for finding a job. Therefore my city unemployment condition getting decrease in an information technology field as well as some other people also get job like peon, watch man, caretaker etc. so, this is very good news for my city in terms of increase the employment percentage.
Secondly, factory also play an important role to increase life style. For instance, In my city, now people are very attracted toward to make a career in information technology. And it helps in improving lifestyle. people are going to get a degree in information technology and as well as in other field because they hope that one they will got a job and life related problem will get less. Children going to school and they prefer to wear a clean cloth and they know different languages and culture which help them to make a good personality and act like civilise person.
Last but not least, factory help to increase the infrastructures directly or indirectly. For example, they help in make road hospitals and school, which is very useful for the local community. In addition to this, they also make awareness through their Trust and NGOs and founded them, which is also make a community to keep a benefited. For instance, plantation and dustbin distribution and teach them how to keep clean the society.
In all the advantages above, there is also another side of the factory. For example, factory make air pollution and water pollution which impact community life drastically. but from the intelligently management this will make a less impactful.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that factory will be prove beneficials for the society.
I my society, unemployment is the biggest problem. 50 percent of
people
are unemployed
and the other half is, do not
get
paid well. A
company
is announced
to build a large
factory
near my
community
, this will prove beneficial for
the my society
in terms of getting a
job
, improving lifestyle, and it will
also
help
in providing a better infrastructure then
now
.
First
and foremost,
people
get
job
from
factory
.
they
will
make
money from it.
For instance
, In my city,
a
Information
technology
company
inaugurated an office of their
company
,
so
my home town students which are
qualify
for that positions,
now
get
a
job
easily
. These days do not
have to
go to another state for finding a
job
.
Therefore
my city unemployment condition getting decrease in an
information
technology
field
as well
as
some
other
people
also
get
job
like peon,
watch
man
, caretaker etc.
so
, this is
very
good
news for my city in terms of increase the employment percentage.
Secondly
,
factory
also
play an
important
role to increase life style.
For instance
, In my city,
now
people
are
very
attracted toward to
make
a career in
information
technology
. And it
helps
in improving lifestyle.
people
are going to
get
a degree in
information
technology
and
as well
as in other field
because
they hope that one they will
got
a
job
and life related problem will
get
less. Children going to
school and
they prefer to wear a clean
cloth and
they know
different
languages and culture which
help
them to
make
a
good
personality and act like
civilise
person.
Last
but
not least,
factory
help
to increase the infrastructures
directly
or
indirectly
.
For example
, they
help
in
make
road hospitals and school, which is
very
useful for the local
community
.
In addition
to this, they
also
make
awareness through their Trust and NGOs and founded them, which is
also
make
a
community
to
keep
a benefited.
For instance
, plantation and dustbin distribution and teach them how to
keep
clean the society.
In all the advantages above, there is
also
another side of the
factory
.
For example
,
factory
make
air pollution and water pollution which impact
community
life
drastically
.
but
from the
intelligently
management this will
make
a less impactful.
From the above reasons and examples, I
strongly
believe that
factory
will be
prove
beneficials
for the society.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes