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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor. v.829

It is better to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor. v. 829
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that humans spend most of their time with their friend and their behaviors have an impact on our life and way toward the success; thus selecting a friend has played a predominant role in people’s life. People should notice to some characteristics which are compulsory for a good friend. Not all people concur when this issue arises. To being cognizant to the logic behind those who repudiate or endorse the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that cleverness of friends is more notable properties than his/her sense of humor. Among a plentitude of reason in support of this assertion, the ability to advise a proper solution in bottleneck situations and urge for attempting hard to acquire success could be picked out for further analysis. To commence with, a consensus has yet to be reached; however regarding the undeniable mind’s power of clever friends in hardships, based upon the statistics of different general questionnaires in sundry countries, people are unanimous about the conviction that intelligent friends could find some worthwhile solution for some problems which normal people could not gain them. Their minds are more creative and help them to survive in difficult situations. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above. Last year me and my friend work on a mutual project in big biorefinery company. Our duty was the start-up and optimizing the ethanol production. One day, I had a problem in control of the reproduction rate of some bio cells in the reactors. I have read all instructions and simulate the process. But I could not fix the problem. When I was very hopeless my friend with a little trick in changing the temperature solved this issue. On that day, I found that the merit of having ingenious friends which save my time and energy. In addition to the reason raised above; encouragement effect of these types of the friend could also substantiate the justifiability of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief, friends behavior effect on each other; consequently, an intelligent friend is successful and prosperous in their life. Thus, when some normal friend observes his/her friend, he stimulates to work harder and compensate his shortcomings with serious efforts. Finally, this procedure obtains success in his life. For instance, my friend, Reza, have produced some powerful articles in the chemical engineering. All professor at our university introduced him as the good researcher. I really eager to do research based projects and I decided to consult him for publishing an article in my research area. Now I send a good article to the famous journal. He encourages me and helps me to write this paper. Drawing up the reason, discreetly put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic is concerned, I reiterate that it is more beneficial for us to find ingenious friends than humorous friends. These friends not only help us in difficult situations by unique solution proposal but also urge us to gain success.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that humans spend most of their time with their
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friend
and their behaviors have an impact on our
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life
and way toward the
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success
;
thus
selecting a
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friend
has played a predominant role in
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people’s
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life
.
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People
should notice to
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some
characteristics which are compulsory for a
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good
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friend
. Not all
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people
concur when this issue arises. To being cognizant to the logic behind those who repudiate or endorse the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that cleverness of
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friends
is more notable properties than his/her sense of humor. Among a
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plentitude
of reason in support of this assertion, the ability to advise a proper solution in bottleneck situations and urge for attempting
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hard
to acquire
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success
could
be picked
out for
further
analysis.

To commence with, a consensus has
yet
to
be reached
;
however
regarding the undeniable mind’s power of clever
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friends
in hardships, based upon the statistics of
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different
general questionnaires in sundry countries,
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people
are unanimous about the conviction that intelligent
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friends
could find
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some
worthwhile solution for
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some
problems which normal
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people
could not gain them. Their minds are more creative and
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help
them to survive in difficult situations. A vivid example can be
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given
to shed light on what
was elaborated
above. Last year me and my
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friend
work on a mutual project in
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big
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biorefinery
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company
. Our duty was the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
-up and optimizing the ethanol production. One day, I had a problem in control of the reproduction rate of
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some
bio cells in the reactors. I have read all instructions and simulate the process.
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But
I could not
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fix
the problem.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I was
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very
hopeless my
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friend
with a
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little
trick in changing the temperature solved this issue. On that day, I found that the merit of having ingenious
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friends
which save my time and energy.

In addition
to the reason raised above; encouragement effect of these types of the
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friend
could
also
substantiate the
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justifiability
of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief,
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friends
behavior effect on each other;
consequently
, an intelligent
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friend
is successful and prosperous in their
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life
.
Thus
, when
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some
normal
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friend
observes his/her
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friend
, he stimulates to work harder and compensate his shortcomings with serious efforts.
Finally
, this procedure obtains
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success
in his
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life
.
For instance
, my
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friend
, Reza, have produced
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some
powerful articles in the chemical engineering. All professor at our university introduced him as the
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good
researcher. I
really
eager to do research based projects and I decided to consult him for publishing an article in my research area.
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Now
I
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send
a
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good
article to the
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famous
journal. He encourages me and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me to write this paper.

Drawing up the reason,
discreetly
put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic
is concerned
, I reiterate that it is more beneficial for us to find ingenious
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friends
than humorous
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friends
. These
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friends
not
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only
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help
us in difficult situations by unique solution proposal
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but
also
urge us to gain
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success
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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Edward De Waal

IELTS essay It is better to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor. v. 829

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
519 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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