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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. MylAL
New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community. I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise. Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I do not want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered. I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I would miss that greatly. A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here and hope that others feel the same way.
New
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factories
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bring
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many
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good
things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity.
However
, in my opinion, the benefits of having a
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factory
are outweighed
by the
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risks
.
That is
why I oppose the plan to build a
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factory
near my community.

I believe that this city would
be harmed
by a large
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factory
.
In particular
, a
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factory
would
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destroy
the quality of the air and water in town.
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Factories
bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will
be hurt
and
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people
’s health will be
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affected
. Having a
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factory
is not worth that rise.

Of course
, more jobs will
be created
by the
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factory
. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will
be needed
. Do we
really
want this much
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growth
,
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so
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fast
? If our town is going in
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growth
, I would prefer slow
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growth
with
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good
planning. I do not want to
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see
rows of
cheaply
constructed townhouses. Our quality of life
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must
be considered
.

I believe that this
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growth
will
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change
our city too much. I
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love
my hometown
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because
it is a safe,
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small
town. It is
also
easy to travel here. If we
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must
expand to hold new citizens, the
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small
-town feel will
be gone
. I would miss that
greatly
.

A
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factory
would be helpful in
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some
ways.
However
, I feel that the
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dangers
are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a
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factory
here and hope that others feel the same way.
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IELTS essay A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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