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A boss doing survey who will do inside cleaning or outside cleaning in the office

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I would like to work at inside; however, if you need more people to work outside, I would be fine with that too. I will mention my reasons why I am preferred cleaning inside the office. My first reason is that I really like to clean indoor either it is office or house. My mother always leaves cleaning work for me because she knows I am great in it. I am always do things with organized way that is why my mother never do compliant about me. Moreover, in this time, many employees like to work inside in warm weather. March is still cold, no one want to stay outdoor in low temperature. So, if you need more people outdoor, I do not mind doing that either. I am the person who like to work everywhere. Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input in this topic.
I would like to
work
at inside;
however
, if you need more
people
to
work
outside, I would be fine with that too. I will mention my reasons why I
am preferred
cleaning inside the office.

My
first
reason is that I
really
like to clean indoor either it is office or
house
. My mother always
leaves
cleaning
work
for me
because
she knows I am great in it. I am always
do
things with organized way
that is
why my mother never do compliant about me.

Moreover
, in this time,
many
employees like to
work
inside in warm weather. March is
still
cold
, no one want to stay outdoor in low temperature.
So
, if you need more
people
outdoor, I do not mind doing that either. I am the person who like to
work
everywhere.

Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input in this topic.
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IELTS essay A boss doing survey who will do inside cleaning or outside cleaning in the office

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