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A book that i enjoyed reading because i had to think a lot.

A book that i enjoyed reading because i had to think a lot. 95nmX
When I read "the works of world", i take delight in bringing tears to my eyes. The authour of this book is uzbek writer Utkir Hoshimov. When I was 11 years old, my teacher advised me to read this book. Although i did not understand much at the time but i was very impressed when i read it later. In general, i think that this book is about life. We are once again convinced that mother is human beings who do not have dignity and their equality. The book is written on the basis of the writer's childhood memories. Maybe, that's why it is so incredibly effictive.
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IELTS essay A book that i enjoyed reading because i had to think a lot.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
107 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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