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A balanced diet is the most effective way to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A balanced diet is the most effective way to stay healthy. x27W6
It is quoted that exercise is main part of good health. Individuals believe that most effective method to keep health healthier is doing exercise in daily routine. I can only partially agree with the statement because having a nutritions and healthy diet is equally important for health. Commencing with supportive points of doing exercise is necessary for individuals to maintain or keep them fit. Performing physical activities in daily routine can help them to strengthen the muscle and enhance the endurance power as well as it helps to maintain the weight, thus it avoid many health problems like heart related disease. Even scientist also proved that exercise helps to balanced in cholesterol level and blood pressure in old age people. However, food also a major effect on health. Supplements are necesary for health for today's genration. Sometime muscle fibres get break while exercising so to repair that body needs more protein in diet. Individuals need both exercise as well as diet for good health. And heavy intake of protein is essential for regular physical activities. The body needs nutriention, vitamins and minerals for well-being. Carbohydrates and unsaturated fat are crucial for body as it provide more energy while doing physical activities energy is required. So diet is necessity for physical fitness. In conclusion, daily exercise is the best solution for vibrant and healthy lifestyle and diet should be rich in vital nutrients, vitamins and minerals, with the the help of each other it make healthy impact on a body.
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that
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exercise
is main part of
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good
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health
. Individuals believe that most effective method to
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keep
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health
healthier is doing
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exercise
in daily routine. I can
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only
partially
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agree
with the statement
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because
having a
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nutritions
and healthy diet is
equally
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important
for health.

Commencing with supportive points of doing
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exercise
is necessary for individuals to maintain or
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keep
them fit. Performing
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physical
activities in daily routine can
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help
them to strengthen the muscle and enhance the endurance power
as well
as it
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helps
to maintain the weight,
thus
it
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avoid
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many
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health
problems like heart related disease. Even scientist
also
proved that
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exercise
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helps
to balanced in cholesterol level and blood pressure in
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old
age
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people
.

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, food
also
a major effect on
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health
. Supplements are
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necesary
for
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health
for
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today
's
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genration
. Sometime muscle
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fibres
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get
break while exercising
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so
to repair that
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body
needs more protein in diet. Individuals need both
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exercise
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as well as
diet for
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good
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health
. And heavy intake of protein is essential for regular
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physical
activities. The
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body
needs
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nutriention
, vitamins and minerals for well-being. Carbohydrates and unsaturated
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fat
are crucial for
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body
as it provide more energy while doing
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physical
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activities
energy
is required
.
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So
diet is necessity for
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physical
fitness.

In conclusion
, daily
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exercise
is the best solution for vibrant and healthy lifestyle and diet should be rich in vital nutrients, vitamins and minerals, with
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the the
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help
of each other it
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make
healthy impact on a
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body
.
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IELTS essay A balanced diet is the most effective way to stay healthy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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