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8. Advantages and disadvantages of working from home

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The internet has enabled individuals to work remotely from home rather than commuting to work on a regular basis, which has transformed the way we work. From my perspective, this evolution offers both benefits and drawbacks. On the plus side, the opportunity to work from home provides a person with greater autonomy. In other words, workers in an office frequently have to pretend to be working when they are squandering time. They have a certain amount of work to accomplish at home, as well as a deadline, and it is up to them to pick when and how they fulfill it. Working from home also allows a person to regulate their own time. Some individuals prefer to work slowly and methodically, while others prefer to work in short spurts. However, in an office setting, employees are frequently under pressure to appear to be working even if they are not. Another benefit is that individuals do not have to spend a significant amount of time each day commuting to and from work and then returning home. Indeed, they do not have to face the daily drive, waiting in heavy traffic for hours on end while their stress levels mount simply to sit in an office all day. Working from home allows them to save time, minimize stress and avoid waiting in traffic, thus this should assist them to work more productively. On the other hand, working from home is often claimed to worsen feelings of isolation in modern culture. Working in an office with no one to talk to may cause people to become more agitated and have a negative impact on their mental health. Working from home may have the downside of not fostering a person's team abilities. In other words, sometimes a company matter can only be handled through cooperation, which is impossible when everyone works from home. Another typical issue is a distraction. People who work from home cannot concentrate with complete attention no matter how hard they try since family members will inevitably intervene. In conclusion, working from home appears to make a worker's job easier and provide them more control. However, there are some tasks that are better accomplished with others present.
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on a regular basis, which has transformed the way we
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. From my perspective, this evolution offers both benefits and drawbacks.

On the plus side, the opportunity to
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work
from home provides a person with greater autonomy. In
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words, workers in an
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office
frequently
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when they are squandering
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. They have a certain amount of
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to accomplish at home,
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as a deadline, and it is up to them to pick when and how they fulfill it.
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from home
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a person to regulate their
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.
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Some
individuals prefer to
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slowly
and
methodically
, while others prefer to
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in short spurts.
However
, in an
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setting, employees are
frequently
under pressure to appear to be
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working
even if they are not. Another benefit is that individuals do not
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have to
spend a significant amount of
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time
each day commuting to and from
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work
and then returning home.
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, they do not
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face the daily drive, waiting in heavy traffic for hours on
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while their
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stress
levels mount
simply
to sit in an
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all day.
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from home
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them to save
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, minimize
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and avoid waiting in traffic,
thus
this should assist them to
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more
productively
.

On the
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hand,
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from home is
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often
claimed to worsen feelings of isolation in modern culture.
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in an
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with no one to talk to may cause
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people
to become more agitated and have a
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negative
impact on their mental health.
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from home may have the downside of not fostering a person's team abilities. In
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who
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from home cannot concentrate with complete attention no matter how
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they try since family members will
inevitably
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In conclusion
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a worker's job easier and provide them more control.
However
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tasks that are better accomplished with others present.
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IELTS essay 8. Advantages and disadvantages of working from home

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4 paragraphs
366 words
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