Replacing the old building with the new ones is compulsory regarding money spent on maintaining and repairing the old buildings. I personally agree with this notion to some extent, which I will explain below.
First and foremost, It would seem that construction of the modern building, perhaps, would save money from maintaining and repairing building cost in some years. This means that if the societies around the building spent money on building construction, they would not spend it frequently to repair the building for a long time. In addition, it appears that new building is generally believed to provide the new perspective, ranging from the city to the country. Furthermore, the modern building would attract many tourists who are looking for the fascinating places to be posted on their social media. As a result, the modern building would increase the income for that city or country.
However, it seems that knocking down the old building would cause some people do not respect their history. The reason often given is that people would lose the existence of building which can remind them of the past. Moreover, it might be said that replacing the historical building is related to the lack of culture that country hold. To illustrate, Malaysia has a crisis identity when they build many modern buildings.
All in all, It is logical to conclude that historical and cultural aspects are not significant things to be considered. This is because not only would the new building construction save money from building's repairing, but help people to earn money from international tourists.
Replacing the
old
building
with the
new
ones is compulsory regarding
money
spent on maintaining and repairing the
old
buildings
. I
personally
agree
with this notion to
some
extent, which I will
explain
below.
First
and foremost, It would seem that construction of the
modern
building
, perhaps, would save
money
from maintaining and repairing
building
cost in
some
years. This means that if the societies around the
building
spent
money
on
building
construction, they would not spend it
frequently
to repair the
building
for a long time.
In addition
, it appears that
new
building
is
generally
believed to provide the
new
perspective, ranging from the city to the country.
Furthermore
, the
modern
building
would attract
many
tourists who are looking for the fascinating places to
be posted
on their social media.
As a result
, the
modern
building
would increase the income for that city or country.
However
, it seems that knocking down the
old
building
would cause
some
people
do not respect their history. The reason
often
given
is that
people
would lose the existence of
building
which can remind them of the past.
Moreover
, it might
be said
that replacing the historical
building
is related
to the lack of culture that country hold. To illustrate, Malaysia has a crisis identity when they build
many
modern
buildings.
All in all, It is logical
to conclude
that historical and cultural aspects are not significant things to
be considered
. This is
because
not
only
would the
new
building
construction save
money
from building's repairing,
but
help
people
to earn
money
from international tourists.
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