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It is true that utilities of buildings are more important than its design. Architectures have to more focus on the building’s quality rather than its looks. I agree with the former view. Also, I will describe my view in brief in upcoming paragraphs. Nowadays, people are looking for safety and comfort instead of luxurious designs of buildings. Firstly, India has larger number of population therefore there is less availability of build area. In this case, if makers use more area in infrastructure and exterior, than it should not specious for living. Secondly, it will cause the increment in total cost of building or home. Hence, not everyone can afford it. Thirdly, planners shall install various life safety measures such as, elevators and fire safety. Moreover, they shall use quality of material for earthquake proof infrastructure. For the given reason, I believe that building should build as per their quality and not as per their beauty. Whereas, there are certain benefits of building which is spectacular from outside. This will attract the buyer to buy that house at high cost. In result, this will create the high profit for builders. Due to increase in competitive market, constructors have to create the eye catching design. In addition, people are moving towards the modern culture and tradition, thus they want change in living standards and design of houses. To conclude, designers shall give priority on quality and safety of construction rather than its look.
It is true that utilities of
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buildings
are more
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important
than its
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design
. Architectures
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have to
more focus on the
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building’s
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quality
rather
than its looks. I
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agree
with the former view.
Also
, I will
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describe
my view
in brief
in upcoming paragraphs.

Nowadays,
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people
are looking for
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safety
and comfort
instead
of luxurious
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designs
of
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buildings
.
Firstly
, India has larger number of population
therefore
there is less availability of build area.
In this case
, if makers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
more area in infrastructure and exterior, than it should not specious for living.
Secondly
, it will cause the increment in total cost of
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building
or home.
Hence
, not everyone can afford it.
Thirdly
, planners shall install various life
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safety
measures such as, elevators and fire
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safety
.
Moreover
, they shall
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use
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quality
of material for earthquake proof infrastructure. For the
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given
reason, I believe that
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building
should build as per their
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quality
and not as per their beauty.

“Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, there are certain benefits of
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building
which is spectacular from outside. This will attract the buyer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
at high cost. In result, this will create the high profit for builders. Due to increase in competitive market, constructors
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
create the
'eye catching' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "eye-catching".
eye catching
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design
.
In addition
,
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people
are moving towards the modern culture and tradition,
thus
they want
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change
in living standards and
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design
of
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houses
.

To conclude
, designers shall give priority on
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quality
and
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safety
of construction
rather
than its look.
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IELTS essay 34rtyuiomp wertyuiok er56t7y8uiop sertyuiop ertyui ertcyvbunio 45678opnxcvybu

Essay
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4 paragraphs
241 words
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5.0
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