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3 goals you set during study at university

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I have set three targets for myself during the process I take the program at this university. first and foremost I crave to reinforce all my English skills, particularly my speaking skills since I'm always being trouble with my pronunciation. moreover, I do hope for becoming a confident person who can present in front of people without fear. besides gain more practical skills when engaged in club. the last aim is to get points with flying colors to win the scholarships.
I have set three targets for myself during the process I take the program at this university.
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first
and foremost I crave to reinforce all my English
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skills
,
particularly
my speaking
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skills
since I'm always being trouble with my pronunciation.
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moreover
, I do hope for becoming a confident person who can present in front of
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people
without fear.
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besides
gain more practical
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skills
when engaged in club.
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the
last aim is to
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get
points with flying colors to win the scholarships.
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IELTS essay 3 goals you set during study at university

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  American English
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