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Importance of english in modern life

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in this age and day, English is a global language throughout the world. it plays a critical role in modern life. Being proficient in communicating in English makes it easier to travel around the world. you can ask for assistance when you get lost, gain more confidence and have the feeling of safety wherever you go. another reason is that most developed countries speak English, besides it's widely used in various fields in life such as science, computers, aviation. therefore it offers you more opportunities for a well-paid job. Last but not least having a keen understanding of English gives you access to films, music, press, books and it's also such a bridge that connects people from different countries together.
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this age and day, English is a global language throughout the world.
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plays a critical role in modern life. Being proficient
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in communicating in
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developed countries
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IELTS essay Importance of english in modern life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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