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writing a famous person in life so that i admired

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I had a chance to see Helen Keller’s life on YouTube thanks to the teacher of homework, it is so meaningful to me. Firstly, she was born in 1880 years with her father was Arthur Keller and her mother was Kate Adams Keller. Unfortunately, she had been blind and mute so Helen struggles with countless difficulties. When she was a kid, everyone always saw her as a burden or far away from her. Secondly, her family has invited a teacher so that teach Helen, this is Sullivan. However, people thought that Helen couldn’t learn because it was impossible but Helen had step changed her existence. Consequently, Sullivan’s enthusiasm helped Helen without dark in life and she learned the alphabet on her hand. Thirdly, Helen was very smart and talented so she has gained achievements. Such as, Helen Keller graduated from Radcliffe College with a Bachelor of Art and became a world-famous advocate for social equality. In short, Helen was a genius person with published work. Therefore, her lifelong dedication to a good cause made everybody admired.
I had a chance to
see
Helen Keller’s life on YouTube thanks to the teacher of homework, it is
so
meaningful to me.
Firstly
, she
was born
in 1880 years with her father was Arthur Keller and her mother was Kate Adams Keller. Unfortunately, she had been blind and mute
so
Helen struggles with countless difficulties. When she was a kid, everyone always
saw
her as a burden or far away from her.
Secondly
, her family has invited a teacher
so
that teach Helen, this is Sullivan.
However
,
people
thought
that Helen couldn’t learn
because
it was impossible
but
Helen had step
changed
her existence.
Consequently
, Sullivan’s enthusiasm
helped
Helen without dark in
life and
she learned the alphabet on her hand.
Thirdly
, Helen was
very
smart and talented
so
she has gained achievements. Such as, Helen Keller graduated from Radcliffe College with a Bachelor of Art and became a world-
famous
advocate for social equality. In short, Helen was a genius person with published work.
Therefore
, her lifelong dedication to a
good
cause made everybody admired.
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IELTS essay writing a famous person in life so that i admired

Essay
  American English
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176 words
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