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Should students have a good qualification in universities to become successful in their career path?

Should students have a good qualification in universities to become successful in their career path? nXpQe
Well, for me, having a good bachelor qualification is always one of the biggest advantages in this era. Degree makes a person more confident in everyone's approach and outlook. If you don't have a degree, what is your "qualification measure" so that people and employers can evaluate. Morever, Having a degree means that it gives you the opportunity to experience a different way of living, take charge of the job or to climb the success ladder.
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bachelor qualification is always one of the biggest advantages in this era. Degree
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a person more confident in everyone's approach and outlook. If you don't have a degree, what is your
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qualification measure
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that
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and employers can evaluate.
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Morever
, Having a degree means that it gives you the opportunity to experience a
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different
way of living, take charge of the job or to climb the success ladder.
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IELTS essay Should students have a good qualification in universities to become successful in their career path?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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