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(2017) In the past, knowledge was stored in books; nowadays, knowledge is stored in the Internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

(2017) In the past, knowledge was stored in books; nowadays, knowledge is stored in the Internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? BgYpp
Traditionally, knowledge has always been written down on books right from our ancestor. But nowadays, technology has taken over, we are given the opportunity to access knowledge through the internet without stress of walking around for a particular book. Information being stored on our search engine has always been a good cause to us humans, it helps reduce stress, money wastage, saves time and many more. Well apart from all those advantages there are disadvantages that comes with it. Nevertheless everything that has an advantage must have a disadvantage. Firstly, inappropriate contents, most people’s concerns are about inappropriate reading, most books in the web are mostly age restricted due to the qualities or contents, but nowadays children don’t actually care especially teenagers the read it with no facts of how or what effect it might have on them. That’s why most movies or books has a parental guidance policy ( should be guide by parents from children) for those underage). Secondly, wrong data can be passed out easily through the interweb. Most people create learning websites just to make money, instead of trying to impact knowledge to young ones they put out wrong informations misleading the younger generation. And the don’t care of what problems the are bringing to youngsters rather the make up words or stories in other to boost their site and make more money. Thirdly, fraudsters, these are opportunities for them to trick people, creating fake websites or links that can be used to hack ones device or create virus in our mobile even end up damaging our computers. In conclusion, I believe that the internet is of good cause despite the disadvantages. It helps us save time, stress, money and many more to us humans. So I would say that the advantage outweighs the disadvantage.
Traditionally
, knowledge has always
been written
down on
books
right from our ancestor.
But
nowadays, technology has taken over, we are
given
the opportunity to access knowledge through the internet without
stress
of walking around for a particular
book
. Information
being stored
on our search engine has always been a
good
cause to us humans, it
helps
reduce
stress
, money wastage, saves time and
many
more. Well apart from all those advantages there are disadvantages that
comes
with it.
Nevertheless
everything that has an advantage
must
have a
disadvantage
.
Firstly
, inappropriate contents, most
people
’s concerns are about inappropriate reading, most
books
in the web
are
mostly
age restricted due to the qualities or contents,
but
nowadays children don’t actually care
especially
teenagers
the read it with no facts of how or what effect it might have on them. That’s why most movies or
books
has a parental guidance policy
(
should be
guide
by parents from children) for those underage
)
.

Secondly
,
wrong
data can
be passed
out
easily
through the
interweb
. Most
people
create learning websites
just
to
make
money,
instead
of trying to impact knowledge to young
ones
they put out
wrong
informations
misleading the younger generation. And
the
don’t care of what problems
the are
bringing to youngsters
rather
the
make
up words or stories in other to boost their site and
make
more money.

Thirdly
, fraudsters, these are opportunities for them to trick
people
, creating fake websites or links that can be
used
to hack
ones
device or create virus in our mobile even
end
up damaging our computers.

In conclusion
, I believe that the internet is of
good
cause despite the disadvantages. It
helps
us save time,
stress
, money and
many
more to us humans.
So
I would say that the advantage outweighs the
disadvantage
.
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IELTS essay (2017) In the past, knowledge was stored in books; nowadays, knowledge is stored in the Internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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