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(2017) In the past, knowledge was stored in books; nowadays, knowledge is stored in the Internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

(2017) In the past, knowledge was stored in books; nowadays, knowledge is stored in the Internet. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? BgYpp

Traditionally, knowledge has always been written down on books right from our ancestor. But nowadays, technology has taken over, we are given the opportunity to access knowledge through the internet without stress of walking around for a particular book. Information being stored on our search engine has always been a good cause to us humans, it helps reduce stress, money wastage, saves time and many more. Well apart from all those advantages there are disadvantages that comes with it. Nevertheless everything that has an advantage must have a disadvantage. Firstly, inappropriate contents, most people’s concerns are about inappropriate reading, most books in the web are mostly age restricted due to the qualities or contents, but nowadays children don’t actually care especially teenagers the read it with no facts of how or what effect it might have on them. That’s why most movies or books has a parental guidance policy ( should be guide by parents from children) for those underage). Secondly, wrong data can be passed out easily through the interweb. Most people create learning websites just to make money, instead of trying to impact knowledge to young ones they put out wrong informations misleading the younger generation. And the don’t care of what problems the are bringing to youngsters rather the make up words or stories in other to boost their site and make more money. Thirdly, fraudsters, these are opportunities for them to trick people, creating fake websites or links that can be used to hack ones device or create virus in our mobile even end up damaging our computers. In conclusion, I believe that the internet is of good cause despite the disadvantages. It helps us save time, stress, money and many more to us humans. So I would say that the advantage outweighs the disadvantage.

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, knowledge has always been written
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books
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But
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given
 the opportunity to access knowledge through the internet without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
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book
. Information being stored
 on our search engine has always been a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 cause to us humans, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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stress
, money wastage, saves time and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. Well apart from all those advantages there are disadvantages that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
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must
 have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetrimentharmprejudice
disadvantage
. Firstly
, inappropriate contents, most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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books
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in the web
 are mostly
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but
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teenagers
 the read it with no facts of how or what effect it might have on them. That’s why most movies or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
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should be Did you mean  "guided"?guided
guide
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)
.

Secondly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
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 out easily
 through the Possible spelling mistake found.inter web
interweb
. Most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 create learning websites This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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make
 money, instead
 of trying to impact knowledge to young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 they put out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?information
informations
 misleading the younger generation. And Did you mean "they" or "that"?theythat
the
 don’t care of what problems Did you mean "they are" or "there are"?they arethere are
the are
 bringing to youngsters rather
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up words or stories in other to boost their site and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 more money.

Thirdly
, fraudsters, these are opportunities for them to trick This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, creating fake websites or links that can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to hack You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 device or create virus in our mobile even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up damaging our computers.

In conclusion
, I believe that the internet is of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 cause despite the disadvantages. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us save time, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
, money and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more to us humans. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I would say that the advantage outweighs the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetrimentharmprejudice
disadvantage
. 