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2. Some schools, usually elementary through high school, have dress codes or requirestudents to wear uniforms. (This is not very common in colleges and universities, except at military schools) What do you think of elementary schools or high schools havin v.1

2. Some schools, usually elementary through high school, have dress codes or requirestudents to wear uniforms. (This is not very common in colleges and universities, except at military schools) What do you think of elementary schools or high schools havin v. 1
Some people think there has been a rise in the amount of fruit and vegetables sent through air to places where the production is impossible or out of season. In this essay I will explain why I think there are more advantages of this mode of transport than disadvantages. The first positive point of air travel is the little time it takes to carry these products from one place to another. Daily buying fresh fruits and vegetables from all around the world in every season of the year is made possible because of this. For instance, Ecuatorian bananas and Brazilian pineapples can be eaten fresh all over the globe. Furthermore, if these were transported by water or roads they would arrive rotten and unavailable for human consumption. Another advantage is that this fresh produce ensures the availability of essential nutrients in our daily menu. The negative aspects of this means of transport is that it is highly more expensive, consequently, the imported items we buy at the market have a greater price than those locally grown. Take, for example, Chinese oranges cost twice more than those locally grown but in spite of having higher prices, people carry on shopping them and that is a significant drawback for the local economy. In conclusion, nowadays, all around the world, shopping availability of fresh fruits and vegetables has increased and made possible because of air transport, therefore people can have vital nutrients and vitamins in their daily menu. These advantages clearly outweigh price and local economy disadvantages.
Some
people
think
there has been a rise in the amount of fruit and vegetables
sent
through air to places where the production is impossible or out of season. In this essay I will
explain
why I
think
there are more advantages of this mode of transport than disadvantages.

The
first
positive
point of air travel is the
little
time it takes to carry these products from one place to another. Daily buying
fresh
fruits and vegetables from all around the world in every season of the year
is made
possible
because of this
.
For instance
,
Ecuatorian
bananas and Brazilian pineapples can
be eaten
fresh
all over the globe.
Furthermore
, if these
were transported
by water or roads they would arrive rotten and unavailable for human consumption. Another advantage is that this
fresh
produce ensures the availability of essential nutrients in our daily menu.

The
negative
aspects of this means of transport is that it is
highly
more expensive,
consequently
, the imported items we
buy
at the market have a greater price than those
locally
grown. Take,
for example
, Chinese oranges cost twice more than those
locally
grown
but
in spite of
having higher prices,
people
carry on shopping them and
that is
a significant drawback for the local economy.

In conclusion
, nowadays, all around the world, shopping availability of
fresh
fruits and vegetables has increased and made possible
because
of air transport,
therefore
people
can have vital nutrients and vitamins in their daily menu. These advantages
clearly
outweigh price and local economy disadvantages.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay 2. Some schools, usually elementary through high school, have dress codes or requirestudents to wear uniforms. (This is not very common in colleges and universities, except at military schools) What do you think of elementary schools or high schools havin v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
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