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2. How the Rosenstein-Rodan big push theory can interpret Rostow’s take-off stage?

2. How the Rosenstein-Rodan big push theory can interpret Rostow’s take-off stage? bYdW6
Rosenstein-Rodan’s idea of the need for creating a big push of investment simultaneously in a number of branches of industry fundamental to the success of the development project in less-developed nations can correspond to Rostow’s stage of take-off. Rosenstein-Rodan's theory mentions massive investment at the very outset of the process of growth as well as Rostow’s take-off stage requires a significant sum of financial funds and assets. Besides, both of them believed that self-sustaining economic development ought to be realized. Rostow stressed the importance of financial investment. Similarly, Rosenstein-Rodan stated the need for investing within various growth channels, which results in Balanced Growth because each channel maintains the growth of others by providing the requisite demand-base. And, as another aspect of similarity, like what is discussed in the take-off stage under the title of the industrial revolution, the big push theory mentioned the need for planned industrialization of underdeveloped and developing countries. To conclude, the Rosenstein-Rodan big push theory can view Rostow's take-off stage since the main features of big push theory are very similar to different characteristics Rostow has introduced in the stage of take-off.
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push
of investment
simultaneously
in a number of branches of industry fundamental to the success of the development project in less-developed nations can correspond to
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Rostow
’s
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stage
of take-off.

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Rosenstein-Rodan
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theory
mentions massive investment at the
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outset of the process of
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growth
as well
as
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Rostow
’s take-off
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stage
requires a significant sum of financial funds and assets.
Besides
, both of them believed that self-sustaining economic development ought to
be realized
.

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Rostow
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stressed
the importance of financial investment.
Similarly
,
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Rosenstein-Rodan
stated the need for investing within various
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growth
channels, which results in Balanced
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Growth
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because
each channel maintains the
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growth
of others by providing the requisite demand-base.

And, as another aspect of similarity, like what
is discussed
in the take-off
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stage
under the title of the industrial revolution, the
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big
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push
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theory
mentioned the need for planned industrialization of underdeveloped and
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developing countries
.

To conclude
, the
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Rosenstein-Rodan
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push
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theory
can view
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Rostow
's take-off
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stage
since the main features of
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push
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are
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very
similar to
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different
characteristics
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Rostow
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IELTS essay 2. How the Rosenstein-Rodan big push theory can interpret Rostow’s take-off stage?

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