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perosnal statement swansea

perosnal statement swansea Nragm

When I saw that Swansea University was a school that encouraged original thinking, I knew this was what I was looking for. Thinking freely in my country is getting more and more difficult due to the conditions, young people are losing their inspiration. I do not want to be someone who lost his innovative spirit in the future and lived just to live. If I can change the life of just one person in the future, I cannot let the light in my eyes go out. I also realize that it will be difficult for me to achieve these alone, so I need to be in collaboration with people with dynamic spirits like me. I have seen a lot of research that Swansea University has accomplished with teamwork and is still working on it. I would also like to experience the happiness of studying in a school where I can get a circle of friends that will prevent me from losing my passion and push me to do better.

When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 that Swansea University was a school that encouraged original thinking, I knew this was what I was looking for. Thinking freely
 in my country is getting more and more difficult due to the conditions, young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are losing their inspiration. I do not want to be someone who lost his innovative spirit in the future and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
. If I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the life of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 one person in the future, I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 the light in my eyes go out. I also
 realize that it will be difficult for me to achieve these alone, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I need to be in collaboration with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with dynamic spirits like me. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 research that Swansea University has accomplished with teamwork and is still
 working on it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would also
 like to experience the happiness of studying in a school where I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a circle of friends that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 me from losing my passion and push me to do better. 