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2. Home schooling can have a negative impact on children ‘s social skills

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Home schooling has grater disadvantage in children socializing with their peers. Because the children who opt for home schooling miss out acquiring the skills of working in a group/ Team work. This might lead them to face difficulties in being a good team player. In particular the children who prefer to do task all by themselves might not be able to achieve their task in time also they might not be aware of sharing, delegating and shared responsibility. Children to become a better citizen they not only need a better academic skills but also social, emotional and interpersonal skills. In other words the lack of social skills may not make a complete man.

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