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2. Describe a time when you experienced a breakdown in communication due to lack of clarity or purposefulness of your, or someone else’s, verbal or nonverbal symbols. What did you learn from this experience?

2. Describe a time when you experienced a breakdown in communication due to lack of clarity or purposefulness of your, or someone else’s, verbal or nonverbal symbols. What did you learn from this experience? xadbN
Each region has its own words which only local people can understand what it means. Take the word “pineapple” as an example. In the South, we call pineapples “trái thơm” but in the North, they call “dứa”. Therefore, the first time I visited Ha Noi located in the North, I have experienced a breakdown in communication. When I was 10 years old, my family traveled to Ha Noi in the summer; therefore, the weather was extremely hot. After visiting tourist attractions and taking lots of photos in the center of Ha Noi, we had lunch in a cosy restaurant which has characteristics of ancient Ha Noi’s architecture. As soon as the waiter brought us our meals, I asked him to bring me a spoon. However, he could not understand what I mean because I said “muỗng” which is used in the South. At that moment, I did not know how to make him understand. I tried to look around and pointed at the spoon in another customer’s hand who was sitting behind my back. Fortunately, the waiter finally could understand.
Each region
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words which
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can
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what it means. Take the word “pineapple” as an example. In the South, we call pineapples “
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trái
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thơm
”
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but
in the North, they call “
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”.
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time I visited Ha
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located in the North, I have experienced a breakdown in communication. When I was 10 years
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, my family traveled to Ha
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Noi
in the summer;
therefore
, the weather was
extremely
hot. After visiting tourist attractions and taking lots of photos in the center of Ha
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Noi
, we had lunch in a
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cosy
restaurant which
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has
characteristics of ancient Ha
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Noi
’s architecture. As
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soon
as the waiter brought us our meals, I asked him to bring me a spoon.
However
, he could not
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understand
what I mean
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because
I said “
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muỗng
” which is
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used
in the South. At that moment, I did not know how to
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make
him
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understand
. I tried to look around and pointed at the spoon in another customer’s hand who was sitting behind my back.
Fortunately
, the waiter
finally
could
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understand
.
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IELTS essay 2. Describe a time when you experienced a breakdown in communication due to lack of clarity or purposefulness of your, or someone else’s, verbal or nonverbal symbols. What did you learn from this experience?

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180 words
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