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2. Achievements should be always progressive? What is your opinion?

2. Achievements should be always progressive? What is your opinion? 2bKBx
Personally, this is the toughest question to answer, because I consider every single step as a small turnover to reach or fulfil my dream objectives. If I mandatory speaks about the greatest achievement, I could say that appreciations from my patients being a complete professional nurse is the greatest achievement in my life ever. While completion of my bachelor’s degree, I felt self-respect towards me but it went paramount when the public salute my profession and professionalism. Well, consider this achievement is not all of a sudden, as I mentioned earlier every single step piled up to become a professional in my career and yes that deserve a lot of skills, education, devotion, support, communication and so on to this field, in which I considered one of the best fields and I personally like the most. I will be glad about this opportunity particularly significant to my professional and educational ladder, which offers new challenges and complexities. In fact, my career is not really long yet, I really like the up gradation and progress. Precisely, the objectives that I made in my professional field demanding me to motivates and inspires me to excel at its greatest. I believe in education which is the foundation of all, in that perspective I will strive and can achieve more for my professional growth. So, this opportunity I considered one among the most and best if I enrolled that offers by FDU.
Personally
, this is the toughest question to answer,
because
I consider every single step as

a
small
turnover to reach or fulfil my dream objectives.

If
I mandatory
speaks about the greatest achievement, I could say that appreciations from my patients being a complete
professional
nurse is the greatest achievement in my life ever. While completion of my bachelor’s degree, I felt self-respect towards me
but
it went paramount when the public salute my profession and professionalism. Well, consider this achievement is not all of a sudden, as I mentioned earlier every single step piled up to become a
professional
in my career and yes that deserve
a lot of
skills
, education, devotion, support, communication and
so
on to this field, in which I considered one of the best fields and I
personally
like the most.

I will be glad about this opportunity
particularly
significant to my
professional
and educational ladder, which offers new challenges and complexities. In fact, my career is not
really
long
yet
, I
really
like the up gradation and progress.
Precisely
, the objectives that I made in my
professional
field demanding me to motivates and inspires me to excel at its greatest.

I believe in education which is the foundation of all, in that perspective I will strive and can achieve more for my
professional
growth.
So
, this opportunity I considered one among the most and best if I enrolled that offers by
FDU
.
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IELTS essay 2. Achievements should be always progressive? What is your opinion?

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