The way in which a family is structured experienced recent changes and this also affected the roles of each member. Everything is being taken care of by the mother and the father only brings money to support his wife and children without getting involved in actually raising them. I think these changes negatively affect the harmony among the entire family.
Furthermore, the increasing burdens of a busy life made it harder for us to commit to our responsibilites and our duties towards his beloved ones. Because we just cannot help being overwhelmed. Instead, we just lose control. For instance, a housewife usually spends seventy percent of her time cooking, washing clothes or even helping her son and her daughter with their homework. Therefore, a clear description no longer exists of everyone's roles in the house because they all depend on the mother to do these duties for them.
On the contrary, a mother needs to take a break like any other human being. In addition, a father needs to start helping her with the chores and everything else. Because major negative consequences will result unless he starts to cooperate, such as divorce or even domestic violence. For example, research showed that the highest divorce rates are caused by the negative attitude that some husbands tend to show towards their wives. Consequently, the changes occuring in a family that leads to distortion in its structure are not always the best thing to happen.
In conclusion, a lot of edits have been implemented recently to the family's composition and duties. These changes included depending on the mother in everything and not being involved enough as a father. Indeed, this will have a negative impact later on.
The way in which a family
is structured
experienced recent
changes
and this
also
affected
the roles of each member. Everything is
being taken
care of by the
mother
and the father
only
brings money to support his wife and children without getting involved in actually raising them. I
think
these
changes
negatively
affect the harmony among the entire family.
Furthermore
, the increasing burdens of a busy life made it harder for us to commit to our
responsibilites
and our duties towards his beloved ones.
Because
we
just
cannot
help
being overwhelmed
.
Instead
, we
just
lose control.
For instance
, a housewife
usually
spends seventy percent of her time cooking, washing clothes or even helping her son and her daughter with their homework.
Therefore
, a
clear
description no longer exists of everyone's roles in the
house
because
they all depend on the
mother
to do these duties for them.
On the contrary
, a
mother
needs to take a break like any other human being.
In addition
, a father needs to
start
helping her with the chores and everything else.
Because
major
negative
consequences will result unless he
starts
to cooperate, such as divorce or even domestic violence.
For example
, research
showed
that the highest divorce rates
are caused
by the
negative
attitude that
some
husbands tend to
show
towards their wives.
Consequently
, the
changes
occuring
in a family that leads to distortion in its structure are not always the best thing to happen.
In conclusion
,
a lot of
edits have
been implemented
recently to the family's composition and duties. These
changes
included depending on the
mother
in everything and not
being involved
enough
as a father.
Indeed
, this will have a
negative
impact later on.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes