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1)Describe an ideal marriage partner. What qualities do you think are mostimportant for a husband or wife? v.2

1)Describe an ideal marriage partner. What qualities do you think are mostimportant for a husband or wife? v. 2
Advertising is the soul of marketing. While some people consider that the quality of the product is its best promoter, rather than special advertising campaigns, others claim that any kind of product, no matter how good or bad it is, it should be promoted through ads. This essay will discuss both views in more details. To begin with, some people think that a good product does not need advertisement to be sold. They might think that if people are pleased they will buy it again and will spread the word around. Furthermore, in time, the product will become a brand, and this will become the ad itself. For example, Sony is a Japanese company which sells electronic devices. They are famous for the amazing quality standards of their products. In addition, it could be said that half of the price is just the brand. So, there are some things that do not need ads to be known and sold because people trust the brand. On the other hand, others believe that anything should be promoted by advertisements. No matter how good a product is it should be put in a special light to fulfil its task on the market. Moreover, the big companies are investing a great amount of money in advertising, even if they know their standards are excellent. For example, companies like Mercedes, Ford, Toyota, have intense commercial campaigns even if they are extremely popular around the world and people buy their cars anyway. To put it short, all the features need to be sustained by an advertisement for a better selling. In conclusion, marketing without advertising is difficult to imagine nowadays. Even if some people claim that quality does not need an ad to be sold, reality shows us that, in fact, it is needed to promote things. In my opinion, the condition of a product is important in the long term for a good marketing. However, even the best products need to be promoted in order to stay in line with their competitors on the market. After all, the better the product is, the better the ad will have to be.
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which sells electronic devices. They are
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products
.
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trust the brand.

On the other hand
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be promoted
by advertisements. No matter how
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good
a
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is it should
be put
in a special light to fulfil its task on the market.
Moreover
, the
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are investing a great amount of money in advertising, even if they know their standards are excellent.
For example
,
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companies
like Mercedes, Ford, Toyota, have intense commercial campaigns even if they are
extremely
popular around the world and
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people
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buy
their cars anyway. To put it short, all the features
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need
to
be sustained
by an advertisement for a better selling.

In conclusion
, marketing without advertising is difficult to imagine nowadays. Even if
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some
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people
claim that quality does not
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need
an ad to
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, reality
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to promote things. In my opinion, the condition of a
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product
is
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good
marketing.
However
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products
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need
to
be promoted
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product
is, the better the ad will
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IELTS essay 1)Describe an ideal marriage partner. What qualities do you think are mostimportant for a husband or wife? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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