11) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2
11) Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
I disagreed that playing a game is fun only when you win. I think playing is fun if i win or loose, , i have two reasons for that:
First: if a group of friends playing soccer together, there will be a soul of helpful, happenies, competition, inspite if they are loose or win this the benefit of playing, my son' s friend he has no father no brothers or sisters, his mom took him to play a soccer with group of boys to let him feel that he is not alone, when they are playing together they were as a one family against other group they hoped win, they were happy if they win or be sad if they were loose.
Second: i think when we loose the game i think we will be stronger, we will try to find the causes, we ' ll be a competitive to win, so it' s build our personality, we ' ll try to find the right way of successful. I remembered when i was playing with my brother a soccer game by playstation, my brother he was the winner in sevral times, i was younger than him, when i finished the game he was going to sleep, but i kept playing, i playing a lot and i tried to find what' s the wrong until i was the winner and i succed all of our friends. it was funny to me if i was the looser or if i was the winner. i ferl so happy now when i rememberd it, it was the best moments. And i apply the same strategy for my life if any one in my class succed me i keep on trying untill i succed him. but
In conclusion we should enjoy playing whether we are the winner or not, by playing we will have a new friends, we will thinking a lot before we doing anything, it' s good excersise for both our body and brain we should keep playing. and it' s finally just a game, it' s not something that' s affect ourlife.
I disagreed that
playing
a game is fun
only
when you
win
. I
think
playing
is fun if
i
win
or loose,
,
i
have two reasons for that:
First
: if a group of
friends
playing
soccer together, there will be a soul of helpful,
happenies
, competition,
inspite
if they are loose or
win
this the benefit of
playing
, my
son&
#039; s
friend
he has no father no brothers or sisters, his mom took him to play a soccer with group of boys to
let
him feel that he is not alone, when they are
playing
together they were as a one family against other group they hoped
win
, they were happy if they
win
or be sad if they were loose.
Second:
i
think
when we loose the game
i
think
we will be stronger, we will try to find the causes, we ' ll be a competitive to
win
,
so
it&
#039; s build our personality, we ' ll try to find the right way of successful. I remembered when
i
was
playing
with my brother a soccer game by
playstation
, my brother he was the
winner
in
sevral
times,
i
was younger than him, when
i
finished the game he was going to sleep,
but
i
kept
playing
,
i
playing
a lot and
i
tried to find
what&
#039; s the
wrong
until
i
was the
winner
and i
succed
all of our
friends
.
it
was
funny
to me if
i
was the looser or if
i
was the
winner
.
i
ferl
so
happy
now
when i
rememberd
it, it was the best moments. And
i
apply the same strategy for my life if
any one
in my
class
succed
me
i
keep
on trying
untill
i
succed
him.
but
In
conclusion we
should enjoy
playing
whether we are the
winner
or not, by
playing
we will have a new
friends
, we will
thinking
a lot
before
we doing
anything,
it&
#039; s
good
excersise
for both our body and brain we should
keep
playing
.
and
it&
#039; s
finally
just
a game,
it&
#039; s not something
that&
#039; s affect
ourlife
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
44Mistakes