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102. Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

102. Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
According to some scientists everyone will be speaking the same word in the near future. This essay will discuss if the prediction does come true, it will lead either aspect of the individual's life. There is no doubt, a catholic phrase will benefit both people and business in bountiful ways. First and foremost, it will make communication not only faster, but also, more comprehensible. People will be able to travel all around the world not to worry about overshoot because of the speech barrier. In addition, manufacturers can advertise about their goods all over the world. For example, people will never face the daunting to understand any country’s accent even it would be beneficial for travelling and hospitality. These few instances can bolster the existing concept that it may work effortless to interact with any other nation. On the other hand, the prospect of having the same dialect for all is foreboding to preserve the cultural identity secret. At first, culture is closely intertwined with language. So, if folk adopt a global slang and deviates for their mother tongue it will put an end to their heritage. For instance, deviating from multitudes own voice will lead to folklore and literature of their word dictionary unavailable to future generations. As a result, people who working as a translator and interpreter will be rendered to jobless. In conclusion, this essay discussed all embracing communication can be profitable for traders and community because it facilitates to having a hassle free conversation. To infer, I am convinced that it may reverberate the famine of culture and variety.
According to
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some
scientists everyone will be speaking the same word in the near future. This essay will discuss if the prediction does
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come
true, it will lead either aspect of the individual's life.

There is no doubt, a catholic phrase will benefit both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and business in bountiful ways.
First
and foremost, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
communication not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
faster,
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but
also
, more comprehensible.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
will be able to travel all around the world not to worry about overshoot
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the speech barrier.
In addition
, manufacturers can advertise about their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
all over the world.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will never face the daunting to understand any country’s accent even it would be beneficial for travelling and hospitality. These few instances can bolster the existing concept that it may work effortless to interact with any other nation.

On the other hand
, the prospect of having the same dialect for all is foreboding to preserve the cultural identity secret. At
first
, culture is
closely
intertwined with language.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, if folk adopt a global slang and deviates for their mother tongue it will put an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
to their heritage.
For instance
, deviating from multitudes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
voice will lead to folklore and literature of their word dictionary unavailable to future generations.
As a result
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who working as a translator and interpreter will
be rendered
to jobless.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed all embracing communication can be profitable for traders and community
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it facilitates to having a hassle free conversation. To infer, I
am convinced
that it may reverberate the famine of culture and variety.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay 102. Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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