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100-word decription of the process of making digital camera

100-word decription of the process of making digital camera 0lML5
There are nine main stages of digital camera production. First, the new concept is designed to attract customers. Afterwards, the design is set in order to create the basic shape of the camera. Subsequently, the lenses are made from heated glasses. Then, it is fit. In the next stage, the components are assembled. Next, the exterior cases are attached so as to protect the inside of the camera. Constantly, the computer software is loaded to get the camera working. Then, the operations are checked to make sure that the camera works. Finally, the colour and lens are tested and zoomed respectively to check the pictures look good.
There are nine main stages of digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
production.
First
, the new concept
is designed
to attract customers. Afterwards, the design
is set
in order to create the basic shape of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
.
Subsequently
, the lenses
are made
from heated glasses. Then, it
is fit
. In the
next
stage, the components
are assembled
.
Next
, the exterior cases
are attached
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
protect the inside of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
.
Constantly
, the computer software
is loaded
to
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get
the
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camera
working. Then, the operations are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
to
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make
sure that the
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camera
works.
Finally
, the
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colour
and lens are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
and zoomed
respectively
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the pictures look
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

IELTS essay 100-word decription of the process of making digital camera

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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