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1. Write a paragraph ( about 150 words) to describe your future plans.

1. Write a paragraph ( about 150 words) to describe your future plans. WG73K
Life is a non-stop endeavor. Every day, we always try to make ourselves better and better. At each stage I will make plans to develop myself. My personal growth plan includes a short-term plan and a long-term plan. Short-term plans are usually set by month and by date. Long-term plans will be set annually. My personal development plan is divided into 3 parts. Health, knowledge, entertainment. In my health plan, I will set exercise time goals, plan for proper eating and time, and sleep. In the knowledge plan, I will list the books to read and aim to accomplish them. At the same time, I also set out a path to take courses for my job. Finally the entertainment part. I will build a list of the songs I want to listen to and the movies I want to watch. From the plan set out to develop myself, I can both ensure good body condition, improve more and more while creating a reasonable entertainment space for myself. Every day I live with the plans I set out. A life of purpose keeps me on track for a better future.
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endeavor. Every day, we always try to
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ourselves better and better. At each stage I will
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to develop myself. My personal growth
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includes a short-term
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and a long-term
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. Short-term
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set by month and by date. Long-term
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. My personal development
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is divided
into 3 parts. Health, knowledge, entertainment. In my health
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, I will set exercise time goals,
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plan
for proper eating and time, and sleep. In the knowledge
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plan
, I will list the books to read and aim to accomplish them. At the same time, I
also
set out a path to take courses for my job.
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Finally
the entertainment part. I will build a list of the songs I want to listen to and the movies I want to
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. From the
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plan
set out to develop myself, I can both ensure
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good
body condition,
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improve
more and more while creating a reasonable entertainment space for myself. Every day I
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live
with the
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I set out. A life of purpose
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me on
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for a better future.
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IELTS essay 1. Write a paragraph ( about 150 words) to describe your future plans.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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