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I have 6 siblings, but the one I like to play with the most is Truc Vy, my 4th younger sister. Vy is nine years old, 5 years younger than me, which might create some sense of generation gap, yet, we still get along well. She is short and slim. She has a pretty face with black hair and big eyes. She is a lovely girl who has a really nice smile. Every time she smiles, it’s like a ray of sunshine in my life. To describe her more, I would say she is such funny person who likes making jokes, generally at the most inappropriate moment. Vy is very creative, and she has talent in drawing. She has a collection of beautiful pictures she draws by herself. She loves everything in pink, her hair band or her jacket is also pink. She plays soccer very well. I think she would become a soccer player in the future if she keeps practicing more. She also loves reading books and although she is younger than me but she is very knowledgeable as an adult. There are times she even advised me how to deal with stresses and obstacles. We often play game, watch movies, enjoy baking cake, visit different places together. We love to talk about our personal issues; she is the only person I can share absolutely anything and everything. She is not only my sister but she is also my best friend.
I have 6 siblings,
but
the one I like to play with the most is
Truc
Vy
, my 4th younger sister.

Vy
is nine years
old
, 5 years younger than me, which might create
some
sense of generation gap,
yet
, we
still
get
along well. She is short and slim. She has a pretty face with black hair and
big
eyes.
She
is a lovely girl who has a
really
nice smile. Every time she smiles, it’s like a ray of sunshine in my life.

To
describe
her more, I would say she is such
funny
person who likes making jokes,
generally
at the most inappropriate moment.
Vy
is
very
creative, and she has talent in drawing. She has a collection of
beautiful
pictures she draws by herself.

She
loves
everything in pink, her hair band or her jacket is
also
pink.
She
plays soccer
very
well. I
think
she would become a soccer player in the future if she
keeps
practicing more. She
also
loves
reading books and although she is younger than me
but
she is
very
knowledgeable as an adult. There are times she even advised me how to deal with
stresses
and obstacles.

We
often
play game,
watch
movies, enjoy baking cake, visit
different
places together. We
love
to talk about our personal issues; she is the
only
person I can share
absolutely
anything and everything. She is not
only
my sister
but
she is
also
my best friend.
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IELTS essay describe a member in your family

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5 paragraphs
243 words
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