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1.The availability of cheap air travel is giving more and more ordinary people the opportunity to travel worldwide. Environmentalists claim that this is leading to global warming. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

Traditionally it is believed worthwhile keeping certain old buildings. For example, many castles around the world are of great historical interest, because they symbolize a specific epoch. Besides, it is claimed that older constructions need to be kept for nostalgic reasons, as they are evocative of another era like 19 century wooden houses in the central part of Moscow. Although I understand the arguments about saving certain buildings as a national heritage, I cannot fully agree with them. In my opinion, some older structures are overrated and a lot of money is spent on maintaining them. In contrast, new buildings are generally cheaper to build and to take care of. It means that it is more economical for a city budget to replace older buildings with modern ones. For instance, on Myastitskaya street in Moscow almost all 19 century houses more demolished and contemporary office buildings were erected. Another reason why modern structures seem more reasonable to me is that older buildings are not practical to work and live in. For example, instead of cramped rooms and low ceilings in 19 century buildings there could be specious and airy apartments with huge glass walls instead of windows. In other words, the living standard may be drastically improved in some urban residential areas. To sum up, this subject is rather controversial, but I strongly believe that the construction of modern buildings is more worthwhile than maintain older ones. From my standpoint, it is economically viable and sensible.
Traditionally
it
is believed
worthwhile keeping certain
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old
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buildings
.
For example
,
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many
castles around the world are of great historical interest,
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because
they symbolize a specific epoch.
Besides
, it
is claimed
that
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older
constructions need to be
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kept
for nostalgic reasons, as they are evocative of another era like 19 century wooden
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houses
in the central part of Moscow.

Although I understand the arguments about saving certain
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buildings
as a national heritage, I cannot
fully
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agree
with them. In my opinion,
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some
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older
structures
are overrated
and
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a lot of
money
is spent
on maintaining them.
In contrast
, new
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buildings
are
generally
cheaper to build and to take care of. It means that it is more economical for a city budget to replace
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
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buildings
with modern
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ones
.
For instance
, on Myastitskaya street in Moscow almost all 19 century
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houses
more demolished and contemporary office
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buildings
were erected
.

Another reason why modern structures seem more reasonable to me is that
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older
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buildings
are not practical to work and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in.
For example
,
instead
of cramped rooms and low ceilings in 19 century
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
there could be specious and airy apartments with huge glass walls
instead
of windows.
In other words
, the living standard may be
drastically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
urban residential areas.

To sum up, this subject is
rather
controversial,
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but
I
strongly
believe that the construction of modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
is more worthwhile than maintain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
. From my standpoint, it is
economically
viable and sensible.

IELTS essay 1. The availability of cheap air travel is giving more and more ordinary people the opportunity to travel worldwide. Environmentalists claim that this is leading to global warming.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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