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Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

In our developing world majority of smart people love watching overseas films rather than domestic films. There are dozen of reasons of this trend and governments can solve this problem by allocating subsidies. Nowadays, it is the film industry that the main source of income of developing countruies is. (USA, France, India) People from other countries which film industry does not developed well prefer to watch foreign films. In those developed countries filmmakers have huge budget that helps them to buy high quality equipments, digital cameras and better audio systems. For the audience plot of movie, digital effects, actors are the main factors to choose films. Lack of these factors in local film making companies make people to refuse watching local movies. Some people think that local actors can not play their role effectively. On the other hand some talented actors left their own country, move abroad to find highly paid jobs there. Lack of budget and actors hinders film makers to generate high quality films. In my opinion, it is government that should revive film industry of its own country. As I mentioned beforehand, some countries in the world get more profit from film industry. If government support film industry, country will benefit not only from film industry but also from tourism. For example, after demonstratiton of Turkey made film “The gift”, a number of tourists coming to Turkey increased. In addition, both governments and film producing companies can get profit from theater tickets. Therefore, firstly, governments must give subsidies to the local film makers. Secondly, governments can give scholarships to the talented actors and film makers, to send them developing countries. Thirdly, governments can restrict the piracy to encourage local film producers. Overall, many people in the world find foreign movies more interesting and attractive. This idea are supported by many acceptable reasons. Governments can encourage its own people to watch local movies by developing local film industry. By giving subsidies and scholarships governments can assist local film makers to improve and generate high quality films.
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people
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love
watching overseas films
rather
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governments
can solve this problem by allocating subsidies.

Nowadays, it is the film
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industry
that the main source of income of
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developing
countruies is. (USA, France, India)
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from other
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countries
which film
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industry
does not developed well prefer to
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foreign films. In those developed
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countries
filmmakers have huge budget that
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helps
them to
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buy
high quality equipments, digital cameras and better audio systems. For the audience plot of
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movie
, digital effects,
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actors
are the main factors to choose films. Lack of these factors in
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local
film making
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companies
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people
to refuse watching
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.
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can not play their role
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abroad to find
highly
paid jobs there. Lack of budget and
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actors
hinders film
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makers
to generate high quality films.

In my opinion, it is
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government
that should revive film
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industry
of its
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own
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country
. As I mentioned beforehand,
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countries
in the world
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more profit from film
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industry
. If
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support film
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industry
,
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will benefit not
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from film
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also
from tourism.
For example
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In addition
, both
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governments
and film producing
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companies
can
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get
profit from theater tickets.
Therefore
,
firstly
,
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governments
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must
give subsidies to the
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local
film
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makers
.
Secondly
,
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governments
can give scholarships to the talented
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actors
and film
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makers
, to
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them
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developing
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countries
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Thirdly
,
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governments
can restrict the piracy to encourage
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local
film producers.

Overall
,
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in the world find foreign
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more interesting and attractive. This
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are supported
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acceptable reasons.
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people
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watch
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local
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movies
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developing
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film
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industry
. By giving subsidies and scholarships
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can assist
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local
film
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makers
to
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improve
and generate high quality films.
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IELTS essay Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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