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1. Describe a typical dish in your country that you like

1. Describe a typical dish in your country that you like N3ayg
When you come to Vietnam, you will have a lot of dishes to enjoy. For example pho, banh xeo, …. And you will love those foods. Now I will say my favorite dish is “bun dau mam tom”. I don't eat it very often. If I eat, I will eat at noon or in the evening. Remember not to eat it in the morning if you don't want to start your morning with an unpleasant scent coming out of your mouth. I usually eat out, so I don't know how to prepare this dish. But I know what ingredients this dish has. Ingredients include: "Rice noodle, tofu, meat, fried nuggets, lots of herbs and an indispensable thing is shrimp paste". I quite like this dish. But if you don't know shrimp paste, it has a very unpleasant smell. That is before mixing with some other ingredients. After brewing, it's still the same but a little better. I love this dish because it's delicious. Although I don't like to eat shrimp paste, I still like this dish. The food there is quite delicious. My favorites are tofu and fried nuggets. If you have the opportunity to go to Vietnam, try this dish if you are a person who can eat shrimp paste. Thanks for listening.
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to enjoy.
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pho
,
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banh
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, …. And you will
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is “bun
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dau
mam tom”. I
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don't
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it
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. If I
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, I will
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at noon or in the evening. Remember not to
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it in the morning if you
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don't
want to
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your morning with an unpleasant scent coming out of your mouth. I
usually
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out,
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I
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dish
.
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But
I know what ingredients this
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has. Ingredients include:
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Rice noodle, tofu, meat, fried nuggets, lots of herbs and an indispensable thing is
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shrimp
paste
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. I quite like this
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better. I
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because
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shrimp
paste, I
still
like this
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. The food there is quite delicious. My favorites are tofu and fried nuggets. If you have the opportunity to go to Vietnam, try this
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if you are a person who can
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paste. Thanks for listening.
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IELTS essay 1. Describe a typical dish in your country that you like

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  American English
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214 words
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