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1. Children should learn second language at school

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Learning other language apart from mother tongue as a part of school curriculum is a boon. Because the children who have opportunity to learn a second language at an early stage in life has greater advantage of becoming a multilingual. This would help children in become more social and confident in interacting with their peers from different parts of the world. In particular, when the student have to travel to another country for higher education he/she has more prospectus as they are fluent with a foreign language. By learning second language children gain problem solving skills, improved concentration and cognitive skills. In other words it’s a gift for life to learn a second language at school.

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