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01/10/2017 You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter. Describe the problem with the equipmentExplain what happened when you v.1

01/10/2017 You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter. Describe the problem with the equipmentExplain what happened when you v. 1
In the recent years, the world of all nations is growing day by day with many ways. The trend of purchasing new items from online has become a major development for the nation. It has occupied the place of stores. I judge that it is a positive growth. There are many reasons behind this phenomenon. In the below paragraphs, I would like to discuss the causes as well as my own opinion. In the recent years, the world of all nations is growing day by day with many ways. For instance, the trend of purchasing new items from online has become a major development for the nation. It has occupied the place of stores. I judge that it is a positive growth. Likewise, there are many reasons behind this phenomenon. In the below paragraphs, I would like to discuss the causes as well as my own opinion. In the recent years, the world of all nations is growing day by day with many ways. For example, the trend of purchasing new items from online has become a major development for the nation. However, it has occupied the place of stores. I judge that it is a positive growth. There are many reasons behind this phenomenon. In the below paragraphs, I would like to discuss the causes as well as my own opinion. To conclude, there are many advantages behind this, but it has been many reported that is not included. I deem that it was outraged by the poor people.
In the recent years, the world of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nations
is growing day by day with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways. The trend of purchasing new items from online has become a major development for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
. It has occupied the place of stores. I judge that it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
growth. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
reasons behind this phenomenon. In the below paragraphs, I would like to discuss the causes
as well
as my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion.

In the recent years, the world of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nations
is growing day by day with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways.
For instance
, the trend of purchasing new items from online has become a major development for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
. It has occupied the place of stores. I judge that it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
growth.
Likewise
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
reasons behind this phenomenon. In the below paragraphs, I would like to discuss the causes
as well
as my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion.

In the recent years, the world of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nations
is growing day by day with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways.
For example
, the trend of purchasing new items from online has become a major development for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
.
However
, it has occupied the place of stores. I judge that it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
growth. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
reasons behind this phenomenon. In the below paragraphs, I would like to discuss the causes
as well
as my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion.

To conclude
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
advantages behind this,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it has been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
reported
that is
not included. I deem that it
was outraged
by the poor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay 01/10/2017 You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter. Describe the problem with the equipmentExplain what happened when you v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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