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The par chart gives information about percentage of divorces in tow different nation which are Finland and Sweden, the period time 2011 and 2015. In Sweden the rate was about 45% in 2011 being higher then Finland around eight percent, then it rose to almost fifty percent in 2012, anyway the figure shows gradual decrease to around 47% in 2013, and continued decline to the end of period, reaching approximately 45% in 2014, and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015. In Finland the proportion was around 47% in 2011, less then Sweden approximately 8%, then it dropped to about 33% in 2012, after that it gradual increase to almost 40% in 2013, in 2014 it became around 41% and stayed the same percentage in 2015. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the par chart that Finland had the lowest number of divorce and Sweden had the highest number of divorce

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 Finland You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
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 from the par chart that Finland had the lowest number of divorce and Sweden had the highest number of divorce