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The diagram below describe how olive oil is made.

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The process describes how to produce olive oil. Overall, there are seven main steps which beginning with harvesting the mature fruit from olive trees and ending with delivering olive oil to storage and sale. Firstly, Farmer will collect ripe olives from trees. Next, all olives will be put in the rinsing machine to be washed with cold water. In the following stage, the olives are transferred via a conveyor belt to another machine. Then, the olives are smashed in a machine to separate olive paste and olive stones In the next step, Olive paste is packed into bags with holes before being put through a pressing machine. After that, they are moved to another machine to separate oil and water. Finally, Olive oil is bought to the warehouse and sold.
The process
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describes
how to produce olive oil.

Overall
, there are seven main steps which beginning with harvesting the mature fruit from olive trees and ending with delivering olive oil to storage and sale.

Firstly
, Farmer will collect ripe
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olives
from trees.
Next
, all
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olives
will
be put
in the rinsing
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machine
to
be washed
with
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cold
water. In the following stage, the
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olives
are transferred
via a conveyor belt to another
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machine
. Then, the
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olives
are smashed
in a
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machine
to separate olive paste and olive stones

In the
next
step, Olive paste
is packed
into bags with holes
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before
being put
through a pressing
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machine
. After that, they are
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moved
to another
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machine
to separate oil and water.
Finally
, Olive oil is
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bought
to the warehouse and sold.
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IELTS academic The diagram below describe how olive oil is made.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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