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The process of yogurt making

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The flow chart shows the eight step-by-step procedures of making yogurt. Overall, the process includes preparing the milk, mixture of old yogurt and little cold milk until fully reconstituted, and finally, the process of setting to refrigeration. In the first stage, the milk will be heated into 100 degrees Celsius of fire into a pan and let it set up to the time that the milk will be slightly warm. Following this, the old yogurt will be mix slowly with little cold milk and whisk the mixture until there is no lump and will be properly incorporated. Subsequently, combine the yogurt mixture and warmed milk. The final step is, wrap the mixture with towel until the temperature cools down. It will take four hours until the yogurt will be set and ready for storage in the refrigerator.
The flow chart
shows
the eight step-by-step procedures of making yogurt.
Overall
, the process includes preparing the
milk
,
mixture
of
old
yogurt and
little
cold
milk
until
fully
reconstituted, and
finally
, the process of setting to refrigeration.

In the
first
stage, the
milk
will
be heated
into 100 degrees Celsius of fire into a pan and
let
it set up to the time that the
milk
will be
slightly
warm. Following this, the
old
yogurt will be
mix
slowly
with
little
cold
milk
and whisk the
mixture
until there is no lump and will be
properly
incorporated.
Subsequently
, combine the yogurt
mixture
and warmed milk.

The final step is, wrap the
mixture
with towel until the temperature cools down. It will take four hours until the yogurt will
be set
and ready for storage in the refrigerator.
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IELTS academic The process of yogurt making

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
137 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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