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The given pie charts compare the proportion of Oscar victors by film type between 2003 and 2008.

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The given pie charts compare the proportion of Oscar victors by film type between 2003 and 2008. Overall, it is clear that thriller film is the most popular genre among Oscar winners while the opposite was true for the comedy genre over the period. Looking at the year 2003 first, thriller films accounted for about 45% of Oscar winners and there is a downward trend, only one-third in 2008. By contrast, the year 2008 witnessed a slight increase of approximately 5% in the number of Oscar champions by action movies.
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pie charts compare the proportion of Oscar victors by film type between 2003 and 2008.

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that thriller film is the most popular genre among Oscar winners while the opposite was true for the comedy genre over the period.

Looking at the year 2003
first
, thriller films accounted for about 45% of Oscar winners and there is a downward trend,
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one-third in 2008. By contrast, the year 2008 witnessed a slight increase of approximately 5% in the number of Oscar champions by action movies.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts compare the proportion of Oscar victors by film type between 2003 and 2008.

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