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You would like to give reasons for your absence yesterday.

You would like to give reasons for your absence yesterday. bxYA6
As for English class on 8th October 2021 at 1. 30 – 4. 30 p. m. I would like to give the reason for absence the class. My name is Pensri Maungchum. I am a Fourth years student and study in English class in group 31 for the Civil Engineering student. Unfortunately, I absence the class that you taught because I must get the vaccinated COVID-19 in 8th October 2021 at 1. 00 p. m. Thus, I can’t take participated with the English class. After I got the message from my friend that I absence your class. I feel sad and worry about it. Could you guide me to solve the issue? I am looking forward to hearing from you and sorry for my mistake.
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for English
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on 8th October 2021 at 1. 30 – 4. 30 p. m. I would like to give the reason for absence the
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My name is
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Pensri
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Maungchum
. I am a Fourth years student and study in English
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in group 31 for the Civil Engineering student. Unfortunately,
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I absence
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that you taught
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because
I
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must
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get
the vaccinated COVID-19 in 8th October 2021 at 1. 00 p. m.
Thus
, I can’t take participated with the English
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class
.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
I
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got
the message from my friend that
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I absence
your
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class
. I feel sad and worry about it. Could you guide me to solve the issue?

I am looking forward to hearing from you and sorry for my mistake.

IELTS academic You would like to give reasons for your absence yesterday.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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